Friday, December 17, 2010

Christmas by MH, EC, PN, and AD

Christmas Christmas
Is so fun.
We open presents
In the morning.
On Christmas
Santa is coming
Tonight on 
Christmas Eve.

2 comments:

  1. You guys really put some work into your poem. I love how you added at the end you put christmas eve instead of just christmas.People are really going to engoy your work. I know i did! The other 2 reasons are that christmas was coming up and you matched your poem with the holiday that was coming up!!!The other reason is that you wrote what christmas was really about.When I write poems like you do and I do what you do...I don't put periods in my poems and you did some stuff that I don't do in my poems.So you guys really taught me about how to do poems!!I really love learning!!I loved reading your poem and excellent work guys I loved it!!!!

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  2. Thank you for sharing your poem, you all are very creative! I can't wait for Christmas now.

    Mimi

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