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WH, I love your voice in this piece, like when you say "This is the place that the scary things hide." You chose your words so carefully...that is something good writers do!
Good book W.H. you gave me a idea THANS from:me:M.H.
I like how you told about each area of the haunted house. Your first page, "This is the place that the scary things hide," gives me goosebumps!love,mom
WH, I love your voice in this piece, like when you say "This is the place that the scary things hide." You chose your words so carefully...that is something good writers do!
ReplyDeleteGood book W.H. you gave me a idea THANS from:me:M.H.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told about each area of the haunted house. Your first page, "This is the place that the scary things hide," gives me goosebumps!
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mom