Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Keeping character details the same.

We learned that we need to keep details of our story the same like Mo Willems does in his books so our readers aren't distracted. For example, if a character's pajamas changed during a sleeping scene, we'd wonder why instead of paying attention to the important elements of the story. Here's what we did:

Haylee wore the same hairbow throughout her story.

Trinity kept consistency in her style by labeling her characters.

Lynk always has three spikes of hair.

Maddy's character is always wearing a heart dress.

Kaydin was careful to make sure his family's car always looked the same.

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