We learned that we need to keep details of our story the same like Mo Willems does in his books so our readers aren't distracted. For example, if a character's pajamas changed during a sleeping scene, we'd wonder why instead of paying attention to the important elements of the story. Here's what we did:
Haylee wore the same hairbow throughout her story.
Trinity kept consistency in her style by labeling her characters.
Lynk always has three spikes of hair.
Maddy's character is always wearing a heart dress.
Kaydin was careful to make sure his family's car always looked the same.
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