You shure know some interesting things about dolphins.I wonder what the rest of your dolphin book well be about? People are shure going to learn about dolphins and it takes some thinking to know a lot.Your dolphin page was exiting to read.
DH...if it's okay, we will use your what-is page for workshops tomorrow! You did many things great nonfiction writers do. What do you think is your main idea?
Superkiddos...before we write today, let's check out where main ideas usually hide in nonfiction text...then let's keep writing...WE ARE EXPERTS!
Dear DH, Your dolphin story had a lot of interesting details! We're wondering if you know why dolphins sleep with one eye open. Our guess is that it keeps them safe from animals that might eat them. Are we right?
You shure know some interesting things about dolphins.I wonder what the rest of your dolphin book well be about? People are shure going to learn about dolphins and it takes some thinking to know a lot.Your dolphin page was exiting to read.
ReplyDeleteDH...if it's okay, we will use your what-is page for workshops tomorrow! You did many things great nonfiction writers do. What do you think is your main idea?
ReplyDeleteSuperkiddos...before we write today, let's check out where main ideas usually hide in nonfiction text...then let's keep writing...WE ARE EXPERTS!
Dear DH, Your dolphin story had a lot of interesting details! We're wondering if you know why dolphins sleep with one eye open. Our guess is that it keeps them safe from animals that might eat them. Are we right?
ReplyDeleteWanted to let you know we used your page to teach in class! Many kids used your style of asking questions as they wrote.
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