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KL, I am so proud of you for writing more details! The first time you brought this entry to me it was very small and missing SO MANY details. You did what good writers do every day: add details, like "girl toys" instead of just "toys."
Great job on writing about toys, you make it sound very exciting!
I love toys too!!!!GREAT GOB!!!Your friends and family well think it's exaelint too!!!
KL, I am so proud of you for writing more details! The first time you brought this entry to me it was very small and missing SO MANY details. You did what good writers do every day: add details, like "girl toys" instead of just "toys."
ReplyDeleteGreat job on writing about toys, you make it sound very exciting!
ReplyDeleteI love toys too!!!!GREAT GOB!!!Your friends and family well think it's exaelint too!!!
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