Thursday, March 20, 2014

Ways to Make Your Slice of Life Longer.

To make your Slice of Life longer, you could...
  • add details, like what things looked like
  • use onomatopoeia
  • add dialogue
  • tell the setting
  • tell how the person/animal/character is feeling
  • use parenthesis/extra information
  • add reasons why someone is doing something
  • tell what happened after the main part
  • add stuff that you do

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